Sunday, August 1, 2010

8.1.10

the one with the Indian Pirates

3rd person pov:
Two Native American Indians stumble upon some pirates. They want to be pirates too, and one of the Pirates agree to let them, but then the guy in charge of the pirates says no and then puts up a big wall to keep them out. Then the pirates decide to take the Indian's as their prisoners.

1st person pov:
I'm one of the Indians that are captured and we are by the fence, being watched from a high post. It's night and the pirates are asleep. Somehow we find a bunch of supplies and we start playing with matches.(Except the matches are toothpicks, but they still light when you strike them against something) We start lighting wax on fire. Then the setting changes and I'm in my living room. We are still held captive by people.(at this point we're no longer Indians and they are no longer pirates.) I'm still trying to burn wax. And then there is a knock on the front door and it's someone to check up on us. We throw all the wax into a bowl and hide it under the couch. This lady comes in to check if we have a guest room. I show her to the computer room and she marvels at how small the bed is. I tell her it's a California King.(its actually a queen.) She says it needs to be bigger. And then we go in the kitchen and it ends.

&fin

notes:
*I like to play with wax on candles. So that's probably why I kept burning wax.
*I hate/love matches. But I can never get them to light, so that's probably why they were toothpicks.
*I recently went to my cousin's new house and saw their bed. They said it was a California king, but it didn't look like one. so that's why that bit was in there.

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